Track Athlete Poem
I am a track athlete
At great speeds I run,
I have to eat
Healthy
Although it is not very fun
I am not that fast
Other people blast
by me
I've started to like sweet tea
I am slow
But I never say no
At great speeds I run,
I have to eat
Healthy
Although it is not very fun
I am not that fast
Other people blast
by me
I've started to like sweet tea
I am slow
But I never say no
I really like the rhyme in the poem it really helped it flow. I also like how the poem is about track because track is a interesting topic.
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme in this poem was superb, and your caesura as well. I am confused on what sweat tea had to do with track though.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I enjoy how you use something that you enjoy, track and incorporate it into your poem. The rhyme in the poem was very good, your use of enjambment causes exaggeration on certain phrases.
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